Band 7+: Why do you people like doing dangerous things

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a reasonable explanation. Consider expanding on the different motivations for engaging in dangerous activities, providing more specific examples, and exploring the psychological aspects in more depth for a more comprehensive response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor improvements could be made by adding a few more cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly and by slightly improving the flow in the second sentence. Consider adding a conjunction like 'because' to connect the two parts of the second sentence more explicitly. For example, you could say, "People especially try dangerous activities like racing and skydiving because they feel a rush of adrenaline."

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The phrase "rush of adrenaline" is well-chosen. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to enhance the response. Consider using synonyms for 'drawn to' or 'worries' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence "Especially people try dangerous activities..." is grammatically incorrect. It should be something like "People especially try..." or "Especially, people try...". The final sentence has a slight grammatical issue; it should read "They feel a rush of adrenaline as their worries disappear." or "They feel a rush of adrenaline, and their worries disappear." More complex grammatical structures could be used to improve the score.