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Band 7+: Why do you people like doing dangerous things

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In my opinion, doing hazardous things can release dopamine levels in your blood, making you feel joy while simultaneously experiencing fear. This is considered to be a pleasure that dangerous activities provide. This can be addictive because the rapid release of dopamine makes individuals addicted to certain activities. Moreover, dangerous things can be harmful to our health as well. But as far as I'm concerned, the joy outweighs the risks they bring.

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In my opinion, doing hazardous things can release some dopamine level in your blood so that you feel joy and in the meanwhile you feel fear. This is considered to be a pleasure that doing some dangerous activities provides. This could be addictive sometimes because the rapid release of dopamine is something that makes individuals addicted to some activities. Moreover, the dangerous things can be harmful for our health too. But as far as I’m concerned, the joy outweighs the risks that it brings.

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release: 2

dopamine: 2

dangerous: 2

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The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'hazardous' and 'dopamine' demonstrate a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to elevate the response. For example, instead of 'joy,' consider using 'euphoria' or 'exhilaration.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor slips. The sentence structures are varied and mostly complex, showing a good command of grammar. The phrase 'as far as I'm concerned' could be replaced with a more formal alternative, such as 'In my view' or 'From my perspective,' to enhance the overall sophistication.

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