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Band 6+: Why do you think tourism is so developed now?

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As you know, we are now living in a society with the development of technology and machines. Besides that, tourism is one of the most important elements that countries build to enhance their economies. In each country, the government has laws and strategies to develop their tourism and attract more tourists to their country. This contributes to the increase in the economy.

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As you know now we are living in the society with the development of technology and machines. Besides that, tourism is one of the most important element country builds to countries economy. So in each country the government have some laws and ways to develop their tourism to attract more tourists come to their country. This country builds the increase in economy.

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points about the role of government and economic factors in tourism development. However, it could be improved by expanding on other contributing factors, such as increased leisure time, affordable travel options, and changes in global culture and attitudes towards travel. A more in-depth analysis of these factors would demonstrate a wider understanding of the topic.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There are a few instances of unnatural phrasing and repetition. Try to speak in a more natural, conversational tone, and focus on smoother transitions between ideas. For example, instead of 'This country builds the increase in economy,' you could say 'This boosts the national economy.'

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the answer uses words like 'element' and 'strategies,' more precise and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response. Consider using words like 'pillar,' 'incentives,' or 'infrastructure' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

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There are some grammatical errors, such as 'element country builds to countries economy' and 'This country builds the increase in economy.' These errors impede the clarity of the message. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy, particularly in sentence structure and subject-verb agreement. Review the use of articles and prepositions.

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