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Band 6+: Why do you think tourism is so developed now?

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Okay, I think tourism is so developed now because of its importance and the effect it has on the country. Tourism is a great resource for the country. You can generate a lot of money from tourism, and countries rely on it because people want to travel and discover new places. They improve their tourism and develop their attractions to appeal to tourists and encourage them to visit the country. So, yeah, it's great.

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Okay, I think tourism is so developed now because of the importance of tourism and the effect on the country. So I think tourism is a great resource for the country. You can have a lot of money from tourism and the countries count on tourism because people want to travel and discover new places. So they improve their tourism and develop their tourism places to affect the tourists and make them come to the country. So yeah, it’s great.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

tourism: 4

country: 3

because: 2

great: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points about the economic benefits of tourism. However, it lacks depth and detail. Consider expanding on the factors contributing to the growth of tourism, such as advancements in transportation, increased leisure time, and the rise of the internet and social media. More specific examples would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The ideas flow logically. Minor repetition ('tourism' and 'so') could be reduced for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow of ideas (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' 'In addition').

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Words like 'affect' could be replaced with more nuanced terms like 'attract' or 'influence.' Using more specific vocabulary related to tourism (e.g., 'infrastructure,' 'hospitality,' 'ecotourism') would enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. Sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures (e.g., subordinate clauses) would demonstrate a wider grammatical range. The phrase 'the countries count on tourism' could be improved to 'countries rely on tourism' for better accuracy.

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