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Band 7+: why is difficult for some people to relax

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There are several reasons that people face challenges in having a relaxed time or unwinding a little in this modern life. The first reason is their mobile phones, as I see many people glued to their devices. Smartphones are like a double-edged sword, bringing many drawbacks as well as benefits.

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There are several reasons that people face challenges in having a relaxed time or unwinding a little bit in this modern life. The first reason is their mobile phones because today I see a lot of people glued to their phones. Smartphones are like a double-edged sword that brings many drawbacks as well as benefits.

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Task Response

The response identifies a relevant reason why people find it difficult to relax. However, it could benefit from further elaboration and development of the ideas presented. Providing more specific examples or expanding on the drawbacks of smartphone use would strengthen the answer.

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The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'The first reason is' provides a clear structure. However, expanding on the connection between mobile phone use and difficulty relaxing would enhance the coherence further. Consider adding more specific examples or elaborations to strengthen the argument.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good phrases like 'glued to their phones' and 'double-edged sword.' To improve, try to incorporate more varied and precise vocabulary related to relaxation and stress. For example, instead of just saying 'drawbacks,' you could specify what kind of drawbacks (e.g., increased anxiety, sleep disruption).

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The grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence structure is varied and appropriate. Minor improvements could include refining the phrasing for smoother delivery. For example, 'because today I see a lot of people glued to their phones' could be slightly rephrased for better flow.

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