Today I’m going to talk about whether it would be better if the school day was eliminated or not. Firstly, I’m going to talk about the amount of knowledge that students need to learn. In my perspective, I see that students do not require a great amount of knowledge. As it’s distributed along the 12-year school years, where it made the subject knowledge divide and become less. Moving to another point, whether students need more time away from school or not, I see that if the school day was eliminated, schools must benefit from this by making subjects for sports such as physical education and learning about the importance of sports or maintaining a healthy body. Last but not least, if the school day was longer, it would absolutely affect the time spent with the student’s family, which would affect on students’ adversely or even on the parents. We can conclude from what I said that if the school day was longer, it would affect adversely on the students, but also it would not only affect adversely on students, but also it would affect adversely on their family.
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Today I'm going to talk about whether it would be better if the school day was longer or not. Firstly, I'm going to discuss the amount of knowledge that students need to learn. In my perspective, I see that students do not require a great amount of knowledge. As it's distributed over the 12 years of schooling, it makes the subject knowledge divide and become less. Moving to another point, whether students need more time away from school or not, I see that if the school day was longer, schools must benefit from this by incorporating subjects for sports, such as physical education, and learning about the importance of sports or maintaining a healthy body. Last but not least, if the school day was longer, it would absolutely affect the time spent with the student's family, which would adversely affect students and even their parents. We can conclude from what I said that if the school day was longer, it would adversely affect the students, but it would not only affect the students adversely; it would also affect their families.
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