You should say: who this person is what kind of business this person is involved in what you know about this business person and explain what you think of this business person.

Thank you for giving me the chance to talk about a famous business person. I want to talk about the owner of the Ahel Corporation, Steve Jobs. He was born in the 1950s and is the owner of this corporation. This corporation is mainly involved in the computer industry. The computer industry started in the [...]