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Band 6+: ✅Your neighborhood is experiencing a surge in crime, and you believe that increased police presence is necessary. Write letter to your local police department. ln your letter: ➖Describe recent incidents or concerns about safety your neighborhood. ➖Explain why having more police presence essential for community security. ➖Request specific actions or strategies to address the crime issue.

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Dear Police Department Members,

I am writing to express my concern regarding the sharp increase in burglaries in the neighborhood called Chilbuloq.

Currently, instances of lawbreaking and criminal activity have risen significantly in our city. Therefore, no fewer than two burglars stole valuable items from multiple houses, and many public people have suffered from this event. Although our neighborhood was provided with a police center by you, these criminals still managed to break into houses and steal valuable items.

I believe that the lack of policemen in the police center, which you made, or the inexperience of workers under your arms is the main reason for this problem. Despite having enough experience, they do not have enough power to maintain security. In my opinion, you must attract more police officers to address this matter.

I hope you have already planned or have made strategies to reduce crime. Otherwise, these offenders will grow in number, and you will not be able to stop them.

I look forward to your earliest response, and I appreciate your time and consideration of my letter.

Yours faithfully,

Osiyo

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

police: 4

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the problem is clear, the reasoning for increased police presence is logical, and a request for action is made. Minor improvements in clarity and specificity would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, and the paragraphs are appropriately structured. Minor improvements in transitions and sentence structure would enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

6

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but there is room for improvement in range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would demonstrate a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the letter is understandable, there are some grammatical inaccuracies that detract from the overall fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly enhance the score.

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