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Band 7+: 📆 15 ОСТОВЕR 📊TASK 1: The chart below gives information about adults with education at high school level in six countries in 2010.

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The image displays a horizontal bar chart with a vertical axis labeled 'COUNTRY' and a horizontal axis labeled 'Percentage' scaled from 0 to 120. The chart compares two categories, '55-64 Year-Olds' and '25-34 Year-Olds', for six countries. The percentage values are as follows: Germany (55-64 Year-Olds: 84%, 25-34 Year-Olds: 88%), USA (55-64 Year-Olds: 90%, 25-34 Year-Olds: 88%), Russia (55-64 Year-Olds: 68%, 25-34 Year-Olds: 94%), S.Korea (55-64 Year-Olds: 44%, 25-34 Year-Olds: 98%), Brazil (55-64 Year-Olds: 28%, 25-34 Year-Olds: 52%), and China (55-64 Year-Olds: 8%, 25-34 Year-Olds: 22%).
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The bar chart compares the proportion of adults with a high school level education in six different countries (Germany, the USA, Russia, S.Korea, Brazil and China) in 2010.

Overall, the proportion of older adults (55-64) in the USA was higher than younger adults (25-34),while in all other countries the youngest group had the highest figure.Additionally, S.Korea recorded the highest percentage in 2010, whereas China had the lowest figure.

The proportion of older adults in Germany was lower than younger adults.In Germany 55-64 year-old was below 80%, whilst the figure for young adults started at 85%.The USA 55-64 year-olds stood at approximately 90%, whereas the younger adults category accounted for roughly 85%.Russia 55-64 year-olds adults accounted for roughly 70%, whereas the figure for younger adults stood at about 90%.

In contrast, the proportion of 25-34-year-old adults in S.Korea was higher than 55-64-year-olds.S.Korea stood at around 97% in 2010.In comparison, the younger adults category accounted for at 45%.Brazil 25-34 year-old adults accounted for just over 50%.China had the lowest figure, with 25-34-year-old adults had 20%, while 55-64-year-olds made up roughly 10%.

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
adults: 12
younger: 5
proportion: 4
accounted: 4
skorea: 3
whereas: 3
55-64: 3
figure: 3
stood: 3
roughly: 3
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Task Response

8
The report effectively addresses the task by comparing the proportions of adults with a high school education across six countries. The overview is clear, and the main trends are identified. The report includes relevant data and supports the observations made. To improve, ensure that all data points are as accurate as possible and that comparisons are consistently precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and supporting paragraphs. However, some transitions could be smoother to improve the flow. For example, the shift from the overview to the detailed analysis of each country could be more seamless. Consider using transitional phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

6
The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language to describe the data. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'accounted for,' try synonyms like 'represented,' 'constituted,' or 'comprised.' Also, explore more sophisticated ways to express numerical relationships, such as 'significantly higher' or 'marginally lower.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The report exhibits a good command of grammar, but there are a few errors that need attention. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. For example, in the sentence 'In Germany 55-64 year-old was below 80%,' the verb should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject. Proofreading carefully will help catch these errors.

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