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Band 5+: A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: -what the presentation was about -why the presentation was important -how the book helped you

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I am writing this letter to express my gratitude that you allowed me to use your book for preparing my presentation.

I have to demonstrate the human computer interaction with our company website, where I have to present how can we make our website user friendly and when any one go through the website so, the person can easily find what he is looking for?

On the basis of this work, my higher management have to choose one person from my department as a Senior Developer however, my promotion was based on this presentation. I was pretty confident but my knowledge on this topic (Human Computer Interaction) was not vast.

Finally, the book you leant me that proved a magical gadget for me. This book made my concepts very clear Moreover, because of this beautiful book I learnt many things and made a successful presentation. The writer told us small points which we usually ignore in our practical work.

I really like to thankful for thing me borrow this book.

Lots of love,

Mahvish

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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website: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the points required by the task, but the explanation could be more detailed and specific. It would be beneficial to provide more information about the actual content of the presentation and how the book specifically helped in preparing it.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the presentation topic and the impact of the book. Consider smoother transitions between ideas for improved cohesion.

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There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter. However, some phrases could be more precise and sophisticated. Try to incorporate more varied and advanced vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with mostly accurate use of punctuation and grammar. To improve, pay attention to sentence structures for more variety and complexity.

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