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Band 4+: a foreign friend of your plane to visit your place to stay with you but you do not have time and that date give your friend and another alternate date to come in your letter you should oppologies for it explane how you will be busy on that date suggest to him an alternate time to come

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dear friend,

i hope so you are fine.you inform me that you come to my city.and i know that you stay in my appartment with me.so i know your plane i am so happy .you visit this area.i think so your descion is best.i know that i am very happy.but i inform you that when you come to my city this days are very buzzy for me.i am much bussy in the meatings.my meating is back no back.now this i dont give time for you.i should appologies for it.so you change your plane.you come in next month.when i am free,and i will give full time.and visit the full city my place is very beautiful.so you can understand for me.you should must come innext month.i will gave full time for you.slam to all familly members.

your sencierly,

X.Y.Z.

Word Count: 137

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. The apology is present but could be more sincere and detailed. The alternative date is mentioned but needs more precision. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable but lacks a logical flow. The numerous grammatical errors and informal language disrupt the coherence. Paragraphing is absent, impacting readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. More precise and sophisticated language is needed to convey the message effectively. Some word choices are inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect the overall clarity and understanding. Sentence structures are often incorrect and lack variety.

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