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Band 6+: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Viswa,

I’m writing to let you know that I will be going to Munnar for a week and I will be staying with Partha. As you promised earlier I want you take care of Donny when I’m away.

Donny needs to be fed 2 times a day and also requires a walk in the morning. I have already stocked his favourite food in the almirah by the door on the top shelf. When you take him for a walk please make sure you leash him properly as he is nowdays very naughty and runs away if you dont hold him tightly.

Also when you come to take Donny for a walk in the morning please keep the windows open as you already know this week it is going to be very humid. I dont want the walls to become damp and ends up with moth.

Thank you for taking care of Donny and the house when I’m away and I promise to return this favour whenever you want it.

Take care,

Harish

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

donny: 3

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Task Response

The letter fully addresses the task, covering all the required points. However, some points could be more detailed, such as the contact details while away, and other household duties. Consider adding more specific instructions and details to make the letter more comprehensive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow. The use of cohesive devices is good, but could be improved with more varied and sophisticated linking words and phrases. Consider using transitional phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise and varied. Consider using more descriptive words to paint a clearer picture, especially when describing the pet's needs and the household duties. Also, avoid using colloquial expressions like 'nowdays'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are some minor errors, such as the use of 'I'm writing to let you know that I will be going' instead of 'I am writing to let you know that I will be going'. Consider proofreading the letter to eliminate these small mistakes.

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