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Band 8+: A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. You should say: • Where you went • Where you stayed and • What you can do there.

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Dear Annie,

I hope you’re well. I’ve got a great place for you to visit when you get some time off work.

I went to Shanghai in China a fortnight ago and it was just perfect. It only takes about 3 hours from where you live and there are some direct flights. We also visited a few other cities in China, but Shanghai was our favourite.

We stayed in a little boutique hotel called the Dragon Inn. It wasn’t the biggest hotel, or the most expensive, but I really loved the personal service and the family who run it were so hospitable. They made us a home cooked meal every night-so authentic.

There are loads of things to do, but my favourite has to be the Bund. You can stroll along there in the evening and admire the view or grad a coffee and watch the world go by. It’s really touristy, but I’m sure you won’t mind that.

Anyway, let me know if you have any questions about your trip.

Best wishes,

Chris

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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear recommendation with specific details about the destination, accommodation, and activities. The response is well-organized and maintains a consistently appropriate tone for a friendly letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented in a logical order, addressing all the points mentioned in the task. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, creating a smooth flow of information. To further enhance coherence, consider adding more specific transitions between paragraphs to explicitly link ideas.

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A good range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the letter. Phrases like 'boutique hotel,' 'hospitable,' and 'authentic' add detail and interest. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to travel and experiences. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with accuracy and control. There are only minor errors, and overall, the grammar and punctuation are appropriate and effective. The sentences are well-constructed, and the letter reads naturally.

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