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Band 6+: a friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. in your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be a suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job.

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Dear Aejaaz,

I hope this letter finds you well. I would like to inform you that I got an update regarding a job openings in your field at my brother’s workplace. Then, our discussion about your job search during our last meet hit my mind.

I heard a very positive comments about this company from my brother; it can be both work-culture and an employee support for future aspects and, also I got to know they are providing sponsorship for onsite migration process which would be very useful for you to shift from your country without any hassle. When it comes to work responsibilities, it is related to “Software Testing” domain and the duties will include; Application Testing, Scripting Test Case Plan and updating your status to higher authorities.

I am sure, this job opening fits your expectation as their requirement is minimal experience which is around 2 years, which you will satisfy based on my understanding. I will share my brother’s employee details for your reference purpose if they ask you during application process and also, I will share the link to apply for the job. I will update, if there is any update on other job openings in my place.

Please drop a line and tell me about your interest on this job.

All the Best,

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

update: 3

about: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by informing the friend about the job, explaining why it would be suitable, and providing instructions on how to apply. However, the explanation of the job and its suitability could be more detailed and specific to better fulfill the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the job and the qualifications of the friend. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better organization of ideas.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is fairly varied and generally accurate. There is evidence of an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some expressions could be more natural and sophisticated. Additionally, some lexical features could be used with more precision and control.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with generally good control. However, there are instances of punctuation and grammatical errors, such as missing articles and inconsistent verb tenses. Proofreading for such errors is recommended.

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