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Band 5+: a friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. in your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be a suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job.

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Dear Carine,

I hope your family and you are doing well. I am fine. Everything is good for me. Last week you texted me because you need help for finding a job. I have a good new for you about one that I think it will be convenient for you.

In fact, there is a company near to my neighborhood which needs a computer science. This firm makes food products such as soap, milk, oil. As you studied in this domain, you will be comfortable at this post.

I choose precisely this company for three reasons. Firstly, a time for work. Indeed, you will work at monday to thursday. You will have three days to visit your family. Secondly, a salary is very consistent, about € 1000 a week. Finally, a trafic in this area is not dense.

To apply for this job, send your appliance letter and you curriculum vitæ with details of your experience online through their email. You will send this before third September of this year.

To our friendship,

Marcelle

Word Count: 174

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task well, providing the necessary information about the job and how to apply. However, some details could be expanded upon, such as the specific responsibilities of the computer science role.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is easy to follow, but some sentences are a bit short and simple. Consider varying sentence structure and using more cohesive devices to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is generally accurate, but some words are not quite right (e.g. 'convenient' instead of 'suitable'). Consider using more precise vocabulary and idiomatic expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors (e.g. 'a time for work' instead of 'working hours'). Consider using a wider range of sentence structures and checking grammar carefully.

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