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Band 5+: A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are in good health. I am writing to give suggestion which you asked, regarding the matter of choosing to fund either children sports team or open-air concert.

I believe, sponsoring local children team will bring many positive outcomes. As the team is facing few financial problems due to lack of resources which is impeding their performance. But, if you give money to them it will play a vital role in children lives as they will be engaged in physical activity, and get motivation to perform well. Moreover, it will also boost their moral, to choose sports as a career in later stages of life.

On the other hand, funding for just two open-air concerts will serve as a source of entertainment. Nowadays, people have a number of entertainment resources, so, providing a fun just twice will not be as helpful as giving children opportunity to play.

I will be really thankful to you if you will consider my feedback and give money to local sports team.

Yours faithfully,

Hiba

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

children: 4

sports: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The benefits of both options are summarized, and a clear recommendation is given. Further development of arguments would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between ideas. Some sentences lack conciseness.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. More sophisticated language would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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