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Band 4+: Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam

I write this letter regarding ‘the angular Fullstack beginner’ course on the university website. I have know that to enroll in the course i should have completed the software engineer elementary course. i wish to enroll in this course due to the following trend in web application development, angular seems to be the best their is. and I wish to learn in a professional capacity

Even though i have not competed the elementary course nor do i have any professional certification in software engineering. I have been always been interested in web application development. I have collaborated with other people and i alone have created certain web applications.

to show my proficiency in web application i can show case the applications that i have done by my-self. I wish to request if there can any special excemption be made for me, in order to enroll in this class. waiting for eagerly waiting for your earliest reply

Thank you

yours sincerely

Ezra Sujeevan

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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course: 5

enroll: 3

application: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining why the student is writing, describing their circumstances, and asking for a special exception to enroll in the course. However, there are some minor issues with clarity and detail that prevent a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, but there are some lapses in organization and clarity. Consider restructuring some sentences for better flow and ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a specific point.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. Work on improving the precision of word choice and pay attention to spelling errors ('excemption' should be 'exemption').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and punctuation for better accuracy.

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