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Band 4+: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • say how you feel about the visit? • suggest what you could do on his/her birthday? • ask what your friend thinks of your idea?

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Dear Mike

I hope you are well

I am glad to hear from you and I want to suggest to you some ideas about how we cab celebrate your birthday. To begining with, I am immensely happy that you are coming thar. We can go to a entertainment park together, becфuse in ther have attroctions and, a lot of entertainment. If you dont like cheerful place that we can go to wherever you want to go. In my city have a lot of beatiful place for to spend birthday, for exemple history place, musical place, entertaimen place and other. I thing you are a funny boy and we go to a theme park. Because this place is the best for spend birthday.

I looking forward to your reply

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter covers all the points in the task, but the suggestions for the birthday celebration are not very specific or detailed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some grammatical errors that make it difficult to understand in places.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate, but there are some errors in word choice and spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are a number of grammatical errors throughout the letter, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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