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Band 6+: Band 7+: The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image comprises two floor plans, the existing plan delineates a 'Not Part Of Existing Gallery' area on the left, followed by sections labeled as 'Permanent Exhibition Space', 'Temporary Exhibition Space', 'Temporary Exhibition Space', and 'Lobby', with an 'Office' adjacent; in the proposed plan, the left area is transformed into a 'Special Exhibition Space', maintaining the 'Permanent Exhibition Space' slightly expanded, accompanied by a new 'Education Area' near the previous 'Office' location, now supplemented with a 'Store/Plant' space.

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The diagrams below compare the floor before and after redevelopment of an art gallery. All in all, the spaces got reorganised and sustainable.

The first diagram presents an initial floor plan, where the building consists of six main areas. The compact entrance area is located on the right side of the gallery. After entering the building a visitor gets into the Lobby zone, which is placed right next to the office. Beyond these rooms, there is a temporary exhibition space, divided into two separate rooms. The permanent exhibition space is situated right after a temporary one, serving as an end of the gallery.

The second diagram depicts the proposed plan of the building with substantial changes, redistributing the spaces and uniting them in three connected zones. The enlarged entrance area is relocated to the Parkinson court side, after which the visitor gets into the permanent exhibition space. The former lobby and office area are switched to the education area with its private entrance and storage. The special exhibition space and its store occupies a right part of a building.

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The report effectively identifies the main changes between the existing and proposed floor plans. It provides a clear overview and attempts to group information logically. However, some descriptions of the spatial relationships are slightly confusing (e.g., the mention of 'Parkinson court side' which is not present in the visual description, and the description of the special exhibition space's location). To improve, ensure that all spatial directions and labels used are strictly derived from the provided visual data to maintain accuracy and clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from an overview to a description of the existing layout and then the proposed changes. However, the progression between sentences could be smoother. The use of cohesive devices is somewhat basic, and some transitions feel abrupt. To improve, try using more sophisticated linking words to show relationships between the changes (e.g., 'In contrast to the original layout,' or 'Consequently, the area previously used for...') rather than just listing features.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for describing the floor plans, using terms like 'reorganised,' 'redistributing,' and 'depicts.' However, there is some repetition and a lack of precision in certain areas. For instance, the phrase 'the spaces got reorganised and sustainable' is somewhat vague and informal. Aim for more academic and precise vocabulary to describe spatial changes, such as 'reconfigured,' 'repurposed,' 'expanded,' or 'integrated.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical inaccuracies that hinder the flow. There are issues with article usage, prepositional phrases, and subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The special exhibition space and its store occupies...'). Additionally, some phrasing is slightly awkward. Focus on refining your use of articles and ensuring that complex sentences are grammatically sound to improve overall accuracy.

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