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Band 5+: Band 7+: The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image comprises two floor plans, the existing plan delineates a 'Not Part Of Existing Gallery' area on the left, followed by sections labeled as 'Permanent Exhibition Space', 'Temporary Exhibition Space', 'Temporary Exhibition Space', and 'Lobby', with an 'Office' adjacent; in the proposed plan, the left area is transformed into a 'Special Exhibition Space', maintaining the 'Permanent Exhibition Space' slightly expanded, accompanied by a new 'Education Area' near the previous 'Office' location, now supplemented with a 'Store/Plant' space.

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The diagram illustrate some changes to proposed floor plan for redesign of the gallery in comparision with existing plan.

Overall, the gallery experienced considerable changes when compared existing plan with propesed plan. The most noticeable difference between two plans is relocating entrance.

As can be seen from the two plans, the entrance is originally connected with lobby in the existing plan, but is moved to thr front of permanent exhibition space in propsed plan. The lobby and office are demolished and replace by education area and store/plant. Therefore, there is a new entrance to link with education area.

Turing to the other features, we can see that the permanent exhibition space is extended to replace two temporary exhibition spaces. Moreover, the exhibition store and specical exhibition space are contructed on the original site of not part of existing gallery.

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The report covers the main features and makes comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is clear, but the description of the entrance relocation could be more precise. Minor spelling errors (e.g., 'propesed', 'thr', 'contructed') and grammatical issues (e.g., 'diagram illustrate') are present. To improve, ensure accurate spelling and grammar, and provide a more balanced description of all key changes. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure but lacks clear paragraphing and some cohesive devices. The message is generally understandable, but there are lapses in coherence due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of features. Employ a wider range of linking words and phrases to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several errors (e.g., 'propesed', 'specical', 'contructed'). There is some attempt at paraphrasing, but the range is narrow and lacks sophistication. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to changes and locations (e.g., 'relocated', 'converted', 'adjacent to'). Use more precise terms and avoid spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('diagram illustrate'), incorrect verb forms ('is moved', 'are contructed'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with relative clauses) and review basic grammar rules, especially tenses and prepositions.

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