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Band 5+: The maps below shows the center of a small town called birshire as it is now , and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image showcases two maps of Bishire, one depicting its present layout and the other its future plans. The present map features a residential area with houses, a school, and a park; a wind farm and cattle farm to the north; and a model farm and open field to the northeast. The future plans map substitutes the wind farm for a supermarket, the cattle farm for a car park, and the model farm/open field for a public park and sports center.

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Two pictures of the Birshire’s center show its infrastructure and how it is planed to be changed.

In general, there are going to be more roads and residential houses. Also a large rural-tupe areas – Farm’s Shops and Farms – are going to be removed and replaced by more modern civilian-needed buidings and places.

Firstly, shops on the bottom of the map will be destructed for building addition houses and continue road, which is on the bottom left of McGoldrick Road. Similarly, Farmer’s Market is going to be demolished to make That street longer on the left, making a Roundabout in the center of the city centre. Both Farms – Hooland and Griffiths – will be replaced by Car Park, which is connected to McGoldrick Road and That street, and Supermarket, respectivelly. Finally, Open field on the right-bottom of the center is going to be removed and the Sport Center will be builded

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The report addresses the task by describing the main changes between the present and future maps, and it makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report mentions 'shops' and 'Farmer's Market' which are not in the visual description, and it omits the public park and the model farm. The description of the roundabout and road extensions is not fully supported by the visual description. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key changes (e.g., wind farm to supermarket, cattle farm to car park, model farm/open field to public park and sports center) and ensure all main features are covered. Also, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'planed', 'rural-tupe', 'destructed', 'builded').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is present but could be more comprehensive. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are difficult to follow. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a range of linking words and referencing to create smoother transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at less common words (e.g., 'demolished', 'roundabout'), but there are several errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'planed', 'rural-tupe', 'buidings', 'destructed', 'respectivelly', 'builded'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are used inaccurately. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing maps and changes, and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use precise terms like 'constructed', 'replaced', 'converted', and 'expanded'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including incorrect verb forms ('will be destructed', 'will be builded'), subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation problems. The range of structures is limited, and errors are frequent. To improve, practice using passive voice correctly, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for punctuation. Use a wider variety of sentence structures, such as relative clauses and conditionals, to demonstrate greater grammatical control.

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