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Band 7+: COFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE CITIES IN AUSTRALIA

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The image shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities, with the following percentages for each city and category: Sydney - Fresh Coffee (44%), Instant Coffee (37%), Prefer Tea (33%); Melbourne - Fresh Coffee (61%), Instant Coffee (42%), Prefer Tea (38%); Brisbane - Fresh Coffee (54%), Instant Coffee (49%), Prefer Tea (42%); Adelaide - Fresh Coffee (40%), Instant Coffee (36%), Prefer Tea (41%); Hobart - Fresh Coffee (63%), Instant Coffee (52%), Prefer Tea (48%).

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The bar chart demonstrates the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five different cities in Australia.

Overall, a high percentage of residents chose to visit a cafe for coffee or tea in Melbourne, while the lowest rate of fresh coffee purchases was observed in Brisbane.

To begin with, Sydney witnessed the highest level of people preferring fresh coffee over any other option, at nearly 45%, while the proportion of people choosing instant coffee had a lowest level of slightly more than 45% in the last four weeks. Melbourne hit a high of roughly 65% of people opting to go to the cafe, whereas the percentage of people choosing instant coffee reached a peak of approximately 55% in the same timeframe in Hobart.

In contrast, Brisbane and Adelaide followed a similar pattern in the choice of fresh coffee, at around 35%, which are the lowest ones in the graph. Additionally, Adelaide presented the least amount of residents going to cafes for at nearly 50%.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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coffee: 7

people: 4

lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the data for coffee and tea habits in five Australian cities. However, there are several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data, such as stating that Sydney had the highest level of fresh coffee preference (when it is actually one of the lower values) and misreporting percentages for Brisbane and Adelaide. The report also omits key details like the 'Prefer Tea' category and focuses on some irrelevant comparisons. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately described, include all categories mentioned in the visual, and provide a clearer overview of the main trends without introducing errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall statement and a logical progression of ideas. However, the paragraphing could be improved for better clarity. The second paragraph attempts to describe specific data but mixes cities and categories in a way that may confuse the reader. Consider grouping information by city or category more systematically to enhance coherence. Additionally, the use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more varied to avoid repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'witnessed the highest level', 'hit a high'). However, there are occasional inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'lowest level of slightly more than 45%' is contradictory, and 'presented the least amount of residents going to cafes for at nearly 50%' is unclear). To improve, aim for more precise and natural phrasing, and ensure that comparisons are clearly expressed. A wider range of synonyms and collocations would also enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are very few errors, and the overall accuracy is high. However, some sentences could be more concise and clear (e.g., 'the proportion of people choosing instant coffee had a lowest level of slightly more than 45%' is awkward). To reach a higher band, focus on refining sentence structures for greater clarity and naturalness, and ensure that all comparisons are grammatically sound.

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