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Band 5+: Combined Charts The table below shows distribution of population in five cities of Pakistan while the pie chart illustrates that of the whole country. Summarize the given information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents data on population distribution, showing a table with cities and a pie chart for country-wide statistics. In the table: Karachi—men 33%, women 32%, children 12%, elders 23%; Lahore—men 30%, women 43%, children 6%, elders 21%; Islamabad—men 23%, women 26%, children 27%, elders 24%. The pie chart for Pakistan depicts: women 34%, men 27%, children 25%, elders 14%.

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The table illustrates the density of population among three different cities including Karachi, Lahore, Islamabad of Pakistan, and the pie chart shows the number of individuals of various groups including men, women, children and elders.

overview, men has a largest population in karachi where women has a highest population in Lahore. It is notable that, children have the largest population over all groups of people in Pakistan.

Firstly, women were densely populated in Lahore which was about 43% in Lahore. the population of elders were 24% in Islamabad which was highest in two other cities. Children have a significantly low number of population among those cities.

On the other hand, overall population of the country shows a different picture. where children have the highest population over the country, it is about 34%. Elders had the lowest population and it estimates only 14%. In addition, Men and women consists almost similar number of population which was 27% and 25% respectively.

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The report addresses the task by describing both the table and the pie chart, and includes an overview. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the overview incorrectly states that children have the largest population in Pakistan, but the pie chart shows women at 34% as the largest group. Additionally, the report misreports the pie chart percentages (men 27%, women 25% instead of women 34%, men 27%) and omits some data from the table (e.g., Karachi's men 33%, women 32%, children 12%, elders 23%). The report also lacks clear comparisons between the cities and the national data. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all key figures, and make explicit comparisons where relevant.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and unclear referencing. For example, the overview is not clearly separated, and the phrase 'overview, men has a largest population...' is awkward. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, such as 'On the other hand' which is used incorrectly. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea, use a range of linking words appropriately, and avoid abrupt shifts between ideas.

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The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. Words like 'density' and 'populated' are used, but there is repetition and some imprecise phrasing, e.g., 'the number of individuals of various groups' could be more concise. There are also errors in word choice, such as 'consists' instead of 'consist' and 'estimates' instead of 'is estimated'. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'account for'), and ensure precise and natural collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('men has', 'women has'), incorrect pluralization ('cities' vs 'city'), and missing articles ('a largest population'). There are also punctuation issues, such as missing capital letters and incorrect use of commas. The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple sentences. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, use a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals), and proofread for punctuation and capitalization.

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