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Band 6+: Condolence Letter A colleague's close family member has passed away. Write a letter of condolence. In your letter: Express your sympathy Share a positive memory or thought Offer support during this difficult time

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Dear Alex,

Please accept my heartfelt condolences on the loss of your father. He was a kind and welcoming person but he left us.

Probably, I can only imagine the pain you must be feeling right now. This is because, I have lost my father a year ago and this was very painful for me. If I had had a chance to meet him, I would have used it. However, it is impossible.

Without a doubt, your dad was a great person since he always helped others. If you remember, we went fishing with him. Significantly, he taught us how catching fish. It was a memorable event. We always remember, cherishing this story and him.

Likewise, If you need anything, I am here for you. You can take time to rest and we will support you at work.

Please accept my deepest sympathies and may your father rest in peace.

Yours dear colleague,

Robert Murodov.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The sympathy is clearly expressed, a positive memory is shared, and support is offered. Minor improvements in clarity and flow would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences lack a strong connection to the preceding ones. Improved sentence structure and transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, showing a good range of words. More precise word choices and a slightly more sophisticated tone would improve the lexical resource score.

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5.5

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