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Band 5+: During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job Begin as follows: Dear ... ,

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Dear Karan,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My name is Pardhuman Singh. As we had a same flight from Toronto to Saskatoon on 17th December, 2025 in Westjet plane.

You are sitting beside my seat. We had lots of talk about what’s happening in the world rightnow. In addition of you mentioned that you are the owner of Gill’s restaurant chain and have 8 franchise of the restaurant. You gave your email address to contact you if I need a job in your restaurants.

Furthermore, as I live in Saskatoon, I saw a job posting on indeed for front desk postion in your Saskatoon location. Currently, I’m looking for job. I have 3 years of Cashier experience in Walmart. I did a diploma in Business Management from Lanaham College. I am really good in cash handling, goof proficiency in English with great customer service skills.

I am attaching my resume in the email. You can look on it.

Thanks for considering my file.I hope to hear from you soon.

Your Sincerely

Pardhuman Singh

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

saskatoon: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed, covering when and where you met the businessman, the job you're interested in, and why you're suitable. There are a few minor areas for improvement: Vary sentence structure for better flow. Proofread carefully to eliminate minor grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. The introduction is a bit lengthy and could be more concise. Consider grouping related ideas together more effectively. For example, the details about the flight and the restaurant chain could be combined into a single paragraph. Also, ensure a smoother flow between paragraphs by using transitional phrases to connect ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and sophistication. Try to use more precise and descriptive language to showcase your skills and experiences. For example, instead of 'really good in cash handling,' you could say 'proficient in cash management and reconciliation.' Also, avoid overly informal expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of prepositions. For example, 'As we had a same flight' should be 'As we were on the same flight,' and 'You are sitting beside my seat' should be 'You were sitting beside me.' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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