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Band 5+: Growth in airport car parking revenue and passenger numbers (2002/3 to 2006/7)

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The image displays a bar graph comparing the growth in airport car parking revenue to passenger numbers from 2002/3 to 2006/7 across five Australian cities. Adelaide shows 80% growth in revenue and 40% growth in passenger numbers. Brisbane reveals 100% growth in revenue and 40% in passengers. Melbourne reports 90% growth in revenue and 40% in passengers. Perth indicates 110% growth in revenue and 60% in passengers. Sydney records 70% growth in revenue and 20% growth in passengers.

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The bar chart illustrates percentage of passengers and the increase of car parking at airport in five different places between 2002 and 2007.

Overall, the highest percentage of parking revenue were at perth as well the passengers. Meanwhile, the lowest percentage of passengers were melbourn. However, the second highest percentage of parking revenue were in this place and brisbane, while melbourne accounted the lowest amount of passengers.

In terms of revenue, perth was the place with most prtion of revenue, approximately 99%, which is slightly followed by melbourne and brisbane to around 90%. Moreover, the figure for adelaide was average, stood at more than 60%, which was dramatically higher than sydney (41%).

Regarding passengers amount, the proportion for perth, brisbane and adelaide were almost similar, ranging between 41% and 50%. In contrast, melbourne showed the lowest percentage of passengers, almost 31%, while this figure was around 7% lower than sydney (38%).

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percentage: 5

passengers: 5

revenue: 4

parking: 3

perth: 3

lowest: 3

brisbane: 3

melbourne: 3

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is not always logical. The introduction could be more precise, and the overview needs to clearly summarize the main trends. Improve the paragraph structure by focusing each paragraph on a specific aspect of the data. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it is not always accurate or effective. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Use more precise language to describe the quantities and changes shown in the graph.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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