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Band 5+: Informal e-mail inviting a friend to a new sports club

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Hi Yaroslava!!

How r u feeling? What’s new? Recently opened a new sports club and we could go to different sections!

This new sports club has got a big swimming pool and gym, well tennis courts, yoga and a sports hall. I really want to go to swimming pool and gym!

it cost only 100 dollars for a year and we can go to different sections like a gym and then go to swimming pool. I think ts a good idea and cost really cheap. By the way, you don’t need to buy special clothes because you just wear your sports clothes.

The first lesson in the gym starts on this Monday at 9.00 am. Also there is a swimming pool that opens at 11.00 am and i would like to visit it. Do u want to come with me? We can meet at my home at 8.30 am and wilk to the sports centre. What do u think about this idea?

Let me know!

Egor

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 5

swimming: 4

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The task is adequately addressed, fulfilling the request to invite a friend to a new sports club. However, some aspects of the invitation could be more detailed and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for an informal email, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter. Some informal abbreviations detract from the overall lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The grammatical errors are frequent and noticeable, impacting the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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