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Band 4+: Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs. Barrett,

Hello, Mrs. Barrett. How is it going ?. I hope this letter find you well, and in good health. I have heard you had more problem in your home. I can do something if you needed.

I know, next summer you will need somebody help you to recondition your house. I can help you do that. I can amend rooftop, paint wall, and more features in your house. I had experience about that.

Since i was a child, i have be habitual to rescue many people. That’s why i want to help you. I am a good person, therefore i will do something to you for complete your problem in your house.

To be honest, i have task from my school until next week. I can’t help you at that moment. However, i will be free in a few monts again. I will be available to help you in next summer.

Thanks a bunch to read my letter. I am waiting your response as soon as posible.

Best regards,

Bayu

Word Count: 173

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by suggesting how the writer could help Mrs. Barrett in her home next summer. However, the content is not well-developed and lacks specific details. The explanation of availability is somewhat clear, but the reasons for wanting to do the work are not fully explained. The response could benefit from providing more specific and detailed suggestions on how the writer could help, as well as a clearer explanation of availability and motivation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks coherence and cohesion as it is difficult to follow the message due to the disorganized structure and lack of clear progression of ideas. There are issues with paragraphing and the overall flow of the letter. Additionally, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect the overall coherence. It would be beneficial to organize the content into clear paragraphs and work on improving the overall flow and structure of the letter.

Lexical Resource

The writer demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary and there are several inaccuracies in word choice and usage. The language used is often informal and lacks sophistication. There is a need for more precise and varied vocabulary to convey the intended meaning effectively. Additionally, there are errors in sentence structures and expressions that impact the overall lexical resource. It would be beneficial to work on expanding the range of vocabulary and using more formal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structures. Punctuation is also inconsistent, and there are errors in the use of articles and prepositions. The writer should focus on improving grammatical accuracy by paying attention to verb forms, sentence structures, and punctuation. Additionally, a more varied use of sentence structures would enhance the overall grammatical range.

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