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Band 6+: My name is Alghery Olivares and this is my ECA Letter

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Carrer Journey:

My name is Alghery Olivares, the first career I studied was Marketing at Rucfa College. The second career I studied was accounting at Rucfa College. I am more passionate about my second career, the love for the order and detail of numbers, I performed better academically in my second major. At accounting school, I studied technician in accounting analysis. At SIECA, I studied for a diploma in foreign trade, and I have attended conferences on logistics and international transportation.

Work Daily Routine:

From Monday to Friday I have a usual routine: I get up at 4:20 am, get ready to go to the gym, I have to be there by 4:50 am, I exercise and finish at 6:10 am, then I finish getting my little one ready to go to school, I have to take him to school, then I return to finish getting ready for work, my work starts at 8:00 am, my mom prepares breakfast and my lunch to take to work. On the way to work while driving, I finish getting ready and have my coffee.

Job Profile:

I am an Operational Cost Supervisor at Oceanica International. My daily tasks include reviewing monitoring reports from my team, which consists of five people, preparing documents to send to different offices, and overseeing billing and cost issues arising from maritime, air, or land operations. I also prepare reports for management and attend meetings to resolve or review operational risks on a daily basis.

Word Count: 246

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

studied: 4

ready: 4

finish: 4

career: 3

second: 3

accounting: 3

school: 3

daily: 3

getting: 3

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Task Response

The response focuses on the requirements of the task, providing information about the writer's career, daily routine, and job profile. However, the task was not provided, so it is difficult to assess whether the information is relevant, appropriate, or accurate. To improve, ensure that all information included directly addresses the specific requirements of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but the introduction could be more engaging. Consider starting with a clear statement of purpose. While the information is presented logically, transitions between the sections (Career Journey, Work Daily Routine, Job Profile) could be smoother to enhance the flow. For example, you could add a sentence that connects your career journey to your current job profile.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good range, especially in describing your job profile. To further enhance this, consider using more varied synonyms and idiomatic expressions where appropriate. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'prepare reports,' you could use 'compile reports' or 'draft reports' occasionally. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with a good range of sentence structures. Pay attention to minor errors to improve clarity. For example, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout the letter. Reviewing the letter for these small errors can significantly enhance the overall impression.

Band 6+: My name is Alghery Olivares and this is my ECA Letter

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