Bar Chart

Band 4+: Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays a stacked bar chart on the number of Netflix subscribers, segmented into United States and International, for the years 2007 to 2016. The total number of subscribers for each year was: 2007, 7.48m; 2008, 9.39m; 2009, 12.27m; 2010, 20.01m; 2011, 23.53m; 2012, 33.27m; 2013, 44.35m. For years with percentage breakdowns, the data is as follows: in 2014, the total was 57.39m, with United States subscribers at 68% and International at 32%; in 2015, the total was 74.76m, with United States at 60% and International at 40%; and in 2016, the total was 93.80m, with United States at 53% and International at 47%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart illustrate the amount of netflix subscribers continues to build its global audience in United states and international at the end of the period.

Overall, in 2016 unitated states and international gain 93.80m followers which is very highest otherwise, both in usa and international who are subscribe netflix in 2007 is 7.48m which is lowest.

In USA the number of followers are climbed in2010 at 20.01 million whereas, in 2011 international people were follow netflix and people are love netflix. In 2014 32% individuals are support internationally and 68% residences are united state followers. In 2015 netflix lovers are went up in other countries. 93.8m people were rose in netflix which is highest in 2016. There are 47% humans chose internationlly and 53% citizens were choose in USA.

Individuals who are supporting netflix increased in all the year. In 2007 to 2010 there are no followers of netflix.

Word Count: 150

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

netflix: 8

international: 4

followers: 4

which: 3

people: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the overall trend and some specific data points, but it contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. Key data such as the exact figures for many years (e.g., 2008, 2009, 2012, 2013) are missing, and the statement that there were no followers from 2007 to 2010 is incorrect. The report also includes irrelevant or unclear comments (e.g., 'people are love netflix') and misinterprets the data (e.g., 'in 2016 unitated states and international gain 93.80m followers' is correct, but the breakdown is not clearly presented). To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends, including all relevant data points, and avoid subjective or irrelevant remarks. Organize the information logically, using clear comparisons and precise figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and some data, but the organization is confusing. The overall trend is not clearly stated, and the progression of ideas is hard to follow. Paragraphing is not effectively used, and there are abrupt shifts between years and regions. To improve, structure the report with a clear introduction, an overview paragraph highlighting the main trend (e.g., steady growth overall, with international share increasing), and then body paragraphs that logically group information (e.g., one for overall growth, one for the US vs. international comparison). Use cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'followers' instead of 'subscribers', 'residences' instead of 'residents', 'humans' instead of 'people'). There is an attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'climbed', 'rose', 'gain'), but the range is narrow and not always accurate. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms related to data description (e.g., 'increase', 'grow', 'account for', 'comprise', 'represent') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions. Also, ensure correct spelling of key terms like 'United States' and 'international'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede understanding. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'chart illustrate'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'are climbed', 'were rose'), and missing articles/prepositions. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex) with accurate grammar. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and ensure each sentence is clear and complete.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

To embark on, the given bar chart illustrate a statistic of the Netflix users and their subscriptions from 2007 to 2016 years period, represented in millions of people every year. Overall, we can see a notable rise in the number of subscribers and effective growth rates of international users. Certainly, from 2007 to 2010, begined […]

Band 5+

Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

The bar chart illustrates amount of people who were watching Netflix between 2007 and 2016. Overall, a clear upward trend can be observed in 2016, it was accounted for the largest proportion of people subscribing for Netflix, while the smallest amount was recorded in 2007 The data indicates that the percentage of males and females […]

Band 4+

See All

The bar chart below shows figures of annual coffee and meat consumption.

The bar chart depicts the consumption of coffee and meat anually in 7 developed countries. It can be clearly seen from the chart that meat consumption is the highest among 7 countries, while coffee is the lowest. USA occupies the top rank of meat consumption by 122 kilograms per person. Furthermore, the consumption of meat […]

Band 6+

The graph below shows the sales of 5 types of items in four different seasons in a US department store in 2011.

The graph illustrates which kinds of goods were sold in winter, spring, summer, and autumn in a US department store in 2011. Units are measured in US dollars. Overall, the sales of women’s clothes were dominant throughout. While the figures for cosmetics and jewellery were relatively lower in winter and spring compared to those for […]

Band 7+

The chart below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004.

The bar graph compares the number of elephants in Asian countries in two years-1997 and 2004. Overall, the number of India elephants was the highest throughout while the opposite was true for the figure for China elephants. The number of elephants in most Asian nations in 1997 was the higher than that in 2004 expect […]

Band 5+

See All

Band 4+: Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

Netflix Continues to Build Its Global Audience Number of Netflix subscribers at the end of the respective period

Other Topics:

The chart below shows the destinations of students graduating from Physics and from Arts Design in one European country in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows figures of annual coffee and meat consumption.

The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of 5 types of items in four different seasons in a US department store in 2011.

The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium