Multiple Graphs

Band 7+: occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image presents a pie chart and a bar graph. The pie chart shows occupations of people suffering from stress-related illness: Writers 8%, Doctors 18%, Chefs 8%, Lecturers 11%, Lawyers 5%, Movie Producers 15%, Programmers 10%, Businessmen 25%. The bar graph illustrates the average number of hours worked per week for each occupation: Writers 30 hours, Doctors 50 hours, Chefs 25 hours, Lecturers 35 hours, Lawyers 40 hours, Movie Producers 45 hours, Programmers 55 hours, Businessmen 65 hours.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

This graph indicates the working hours of professionals and the percentage of people suffering from illness related to stress from each job title. It is crystal clear that businessmen and movie directors work over 60 hours a week, but 25 percent of lecturers have undergone health issues related to stress.

Apart from the previously mentioned, the second most people suffering from stress-related illness were movie producers and doctors, they are 18 percent and 15 percent separately in total. Doctors also work a lot in a week, nearly 52 hours a week, and 45 hours a week for writers.

There are some professions that had less people report they have stress-related illness. Doctors were 11 percent, 10 percent for chefs, 8 percent for lawyers and writers, and programmers.

Less working hours have been shown in programmers and lawyers; they work for 40 and 35 hours a week, while chefs and lecturers are working 30 and 25 hours a week.

Word Count: 158

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hours: 7

percent: 6

working: 3

people: 3

illness: 3

doctors: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report provides a good overview of the data, but it could be more precise in its analysis. For example, it mentions that '25 percent of lecturers have undergone health issues related to stress,' but the chart shows that 11% of people suffering from stress-related illness are lecturers. The report also mentions that 'doctors work a lot in a week, nearly 52 hours a week,' but the chart shows that doctors work 50 hours a week. Overall, the report demonstrates a good understanding of the data, but it could be more accurate in its details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few instances where the flow of ideas could be improved. For example, the report jumps back and forth between discussing the percentage of people suffering from stress-related illness and the average number of hours worked per week. A more logical structure would be to discuss one aspect of the data at a time.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise language could be used. For example, the report uses the phrase 'undergone health issues related to stress,' which is not as specific as 'suffer from stress-related illness.' Overall, the report demonstrates a good command of vocabulary, but it could be more precise in its word choice. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report is grammatically accurate and uses a variety of sentence structures. The grammar is error-free and the report is easy to read and understand.

Answers On The Same Topic:

occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

The bar chart illustrates the average number of hours worked per week by eight different occupational groups, while the pie chart compares the proportion of workers suffering from stress-related illnesses within these professions. Overall, business men work the longest hours, whereas lecturers spend the least time on work per week. In contrast, the pie chart […]

Band 8+

occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

These charts give us information about people who get ill from professional stress and the statistics of working hours in a week in some occupations. According to the pie chart the lecturers has the most percentage among other professions. 25% of lecturers deal with acquisition of different sickness. Although the smallest index consists of only […]

Band 5+

occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

The data present the average number of hours, which specific occupations work for, as well as which careers get stress related illnesses. Overall, jobs, which have the highest working hours, such as business men and movie producers are also more likely to get an illness due to stress. However, an occupation between 30 and 40 […]

Band 6+

occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

The bar graph and pie chart compares the work hours and work-related stress level of employees in different eight job categories. Units are measured in numbers and percentages. Overall, the amount of business men’s work hours outnumbers other figures. Despite, the lecturers bucked the trend by spending less time at work, their work is more […]

Band 6+

occupation of people suffering from stress related illness and average number of hourse worked per week

The bar graph depicts the average number of hours people worked in 8 diverse occupations per week, while the pie chart provides insights into the levels of stress-related illnesses among various professions. Overall, in the first graph, people who runs business and produces movies, lead the list of average worked hours in a week, while […]

Band 6+

See All

The chart and table below show the life expectancy in 2008 and increase in life expectancy between 1983 and 2008.

The chart and table demonstrate four countries (Japan, Korea, America and Indonesia) regarding the life expectancy in 2008 and risen life expectancy over 25 years. Overall, Japan, experienced a peak in life expectancy from 1983 to 2008, while the Korea and U.S. witnessed a familiar in the past 25 years. It is shown that Indonesia […]

Band 5+

The pie graphs show greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030. The column chart shows carbon dioxide emissions around the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

While the pie charts provide greenhouse gas emissions worldwide between 2002 and 2030, the column chart illustrates carbon dioxide emissions in five different group included industry, consumer, transportation, waste combustion and other sectors. Overall, while the data of greenhouse gas emissions in OECD and transition economies experienced a downward trend between 2002 and 2030, the […]

Band 5+

The chrats below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers

The two bar charts show why students of different ages study and the amount of support they get from their employers. Overall, younger students study mainly for their careers, while older students study for personal interest. Additionally, employer support decreases as students get older, except for the oldest groups. In the first chart, about 80% […]

Band 8+

The table below shows the number of students at a primary school and a secondary school in Malasysia in 2005. The charts show every survey results of what these students favourite sport was.

The table illustrates the number of students at a primary school and a secondary school in Malaysia in 2005, while the pie charts show the sports preferred by these students. Overall, the number of secondary school students is higher than that of primary school students. Meanwhile, tennis is the most popular sport among primary school […]

Band 7+

The charts below give information about the purposes of passengers flying from four different airports in the UK in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts provide information regarding the flight’s purposes at four distinct airports in 2016. ;Overall, visiting friends or family and traveling holidays were by far the most popular reasons in comparison to others. In addition, the remaining purposes ( business and other) consisted of less significant shares. In 2006, around 54% of passengers at […]

Band 8+

The pie charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013

The pie chart illustrates the sales of new vehicles in Australia, spanning 1984, 1993 and 2013. Overall, the sales of new three cars showed different trends, with Sedans recorded the highest figure at the start of the period, before accounted for just over half of the market. According to the chart, Sedans made up the […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium