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Band 7+: On a recent Holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In letter Explain the item you lost, Explain how you lost it, Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to inform you about loss of a valuable item during my recent trip for which I have travel insurance from your company.

The item I lost was pink tote travel bag from the brand Nike, with a purple tumbler on the right side pocket and a box for sunglasses attached to the left strap of the bag. The bag contained some change of clothes, a hat, and toiletries.

The last memory of the bag I have is from the beach, in Costa Rica. I had my bag with me until we get in the tour bus to get us back at hotel. I went to have dinner and waited for my baggage to be delivered but did not receive it.

I kindly request you to provide me with necessary paperwork to be filled out to submit the insurance claim. I would greatly appreciate the assistance and guidance from you. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or concerns. Thank you.

Yours faithfully,

Sarina Shrestha

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7.5

The letter adequately addresses all three points of the task by explaining the lost item, how it was lost, and what the writer would like the insurance company to do. To improve, consider providing more specific details about the incident and the efforts made to retrieve the lost item.

Coherence & Cohesion

7.5

The letter is well-organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The ideas are presented logically, and there is a good use of paragraphing. To enhance coherence, try to establish stronger connections between sentences and ideas.

Lexical Resource

7.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter, with some specific terms related to the lost item. To further improve, incorporate more varied vocabulary and expressions to make the letter more engaging and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar and punctuation. However, there are a few minor errors that could be corrected, such as missing articles ('a purple tumbler' should be 'a purple tumbler'). Pay attention to these details for better accuracy.

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