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Band 7+: One hundred adults, boys and girls in Manchester, England were asked to name the sports they participated in. The results were recorded in the following stacked bar chart.

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The image presents a stacked bar chart representing sports participation among adults, boys, and girls in Manchester, England. Basketball participation: adults approximately 25, boys 50, girls 25; Swimming: adults approximately 75, boys 25, girls 50; Tennis: adults 50, boys 25, girls approximately 25; Football: adults approximately 100, boys 50, girls approximately 25; Hockey: adults approximately 50, boys 50, girls 25. All values are estimated as specific numerical data points are not provided on the graph.

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The chart demonstrates the responses of a group consisting of 100 boys, 100 girls and 100 adults in Manchester, England, when asked whether they participated in four sports such as basketball, swimming, tennis and football.

From their responses, it is clear that swimming is the most popular sport among all groups, and that from these three groups, boys participated in the most sports.

In fact, for three out of the four sports, boys were the major participants. The only sport not enjoyed by boys was hockey, a sport that the vast majority of the girls who were interviewed participated in. Other sports enjoyed by girls were swimming, tennis and basketball. However, only a very small number, approximately 10 out of the 100, participated in football.

Eventually, the biggest number of adults were engaged in tennis, about 40 out of 100, followed by swimming. Furthermore, less than 10 mature people participated in basketball, football and tennis.

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participated: 5

swimming: 4

tennis: 4

girls: 3

sports: 3

basketball: 3

sport: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It incorrectly states the sample sizes (100 boys, 100 girls, 100 adults) and misidentifies the sports (omits hockey and includes tennis twice). The data reported for adults is inaccurate (e.g., tennis 40 instead of 50, and less than 10 for basketball, football, and tennis is incorrect). The overview is somewhat misleading, as swimming is not the most popular for all groups. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all sports, and provide a clear summary of main trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly states the purpose, and the body paragraphs present key trends. However, the final paragraph introduces new information (adults' participation) that could be better integrated with the overall structure. The use of cohesive devices is adequate, but some transitions could be smoother. Consider using more varied linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'demonstrates', 'participated in'). However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'participated') and a few imprecise word choices (e.g., 'mature people' instead of 'adults'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'the biggest number' and use more formal alternatives.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, with some complex sentences used effectively. However, there are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'the biggest number of adults were engaged' should be 'the largest number of adults were engaged', and 'less than 10 mature people' is awkward). Punctuation is generally correct. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement and use more precise quantifiers.

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