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Band 5+: One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, and your manager has asked you to arrange a farewell party for him/her. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a place discuss the food and entertainment options that should be available.

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Dear Mr Ali,

I am writing this letter to update you about the arrangement of the farewell party for our teammate, Mr ayyan which you told me to organize.

I am planning to organize the farewell party. I think we all are free in the second week of this month. on sunday it is a family day and everyone is so buzy that why i suggest you saturday will be easy for us after office at 7-8pm so that comfortable for everyone.

I have arranged a good place with a roof top. it is a good area and near to the office. we all can spend a good time with him. they has good service and environment. we can book their dinner buffet. its has a variety of options. on saturday there is life qawwali and bonfire. we can enjoy it.

I believe it will be a memorable get together. kindly tell me if you want to change anything or can give me new suggestion.

I am looking forward to hear from you.

Your sincerely,

Abdullah Yusuf

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, some aspects could be more detailed and formally presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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