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Band 8+: One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend’s offer. In your letter -Give your opinion of your friend’s business idea. - Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reasons for this decision.

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hope you’re doing well. I like your idea to open a small bakery. Many people love fresh bread and cakes, and your plan to make homemade pastries is good. I think it can work in our town.

After thinking, l’ve decided to join you as a partner. I believe we can do well together. I have some money to help start the business, and I can work in the shop or help with advertising. Your baking skills are great, and I’m excited to be part of this. Also, I think this business can grow because people always want tasty food.

Let’s talk soon about how much money and time we need. I want to make sure we plan everything carefully.

Thank you for asking me to join your bakery idea!

Best wishes,

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

8.5

All parts of the task are successfully addressed. The response is well-organized and easy to follow. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter flows smoothly and logically. The ideas are connected effectively, creating a cohesive and easy-to-read piece.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The vocabulary is appropriate and accurate, demonstrating a good range of words. While sophisticated, there is room for more varied and precise vocabulary choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not impede understanding. The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but more complex structures could be incorporated for a higher score.

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