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The image displays four pie charts on hours worked. Government Sector - Men: Over 46 hours 30%, 1-2 hours 23%, 6-12 hours 23%, 31-45 hours 15%, and 13-30 hours 9%. Government Sector - Women: 6-12 hours 35%, 13-30 hours 23%, 31-45 hours 20%, 1-2 hours 18%, and Over 46 hours 4%. Private Sector - Men, visible data: Over 46 hours 34%, 13-30 hours 21%, 31-45 hours 20%, and 1-2 hours 5%. Private Sector - Women: 6-12 hours 35%, 1-2 hours 21%, 13-30 hours 20%, 31-45 hours 20%, and Over 46 hours 4%.

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The graph below provides information about total weekly working time of male and female labours in private and public sectors.

Overall, it is clear that in private sector majority of men work over 46 hours while only tiny part of women work full hours. In government institutions proportion of men workers raises only for few percents and in the same sector female workers percentage is constant.

In detail, in government sector huge number of men spend most of their time to work. It consists 30%. About 15% 31-45 hours, 9% 13-30 hours, 23% of them 6-12 hours and 23% work only 1-2 hours. In private sector only 5% of male employees work 1-2 hours, 21% 13-30 hours and 34% over 46 hours.

In contrast, in public institutions 4% of women perform tasks more than 46 hours, 20% 31-54 hours, 23% 13-30 hours, 35% 6-12 hours and 18-2 hours. In private sector there are not significant changes. 3% more women work 1-2 hours and 3% less women carry out their tasks 13-30 hours.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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hours: 15

sector: 5

private: 4

women: 4

13-30: 4

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the pie charts, providing a general overview and some specific details. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, particularly in the final paragraph, which could be more precise. To improve, focus on ensuring all data references are accurate and that comparisons are clearly articulated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The overview is present but could be more insightful. Transitions between details of different sectors and genders need improvement to enhance clarity. Paragraphing is acceptable, but the connection between paragraphs could be stronger. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but it lacks sophistication and precision. There's some repetition of basic terms. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to data description and comparison. For example, instead of always using 'percentage,' consider alternatives like 'proportion,' 'share,' or 'fraction.' Also, focus on using more precise language to describe the data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. There are issues with article usage, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement. Pay close attention to these areas and proofread carefully to minimize errors. Aim to use a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more effectively.

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