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Band 5+: Pie chart: The chart shows the reasons why people moved from one part of Vietnam to live in another. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. Here are the data for each reasons why Vietnamese people moved internally in 2012 (in percentages). Employment (54.5%); Study (11.4%); Marriage (21%); Others (13.1%)

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Image for topic: Pie chart: The chart shows the reasons why people moved from one part of Vietnam to live in another. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. Here are the data for each reasons why Vietnamese people moved internally in 2012 (in percentages). Employment (54.5%); Study (11.4%); Marriage (21%); Others (13.1%)

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The chart below a pepole who live a Vietnam and another place, in 2012 and chose the main future.

Overall, employment was by far the most significant reason for internal migration, while study accounted for the smallest proportion. Marriage and other reasons also contributed notably to population movement within the country.

Ferstly, many humans choose in 2012 for live Vietnames , adjust employment a procentege 54.5% this main a hige lavel on the another and Marriage the same 21.0%

By contrast, only 11.4% of individuals moved in order to pursue education, representing the lowest share among the four categories. Meanwhile, 13.1% of migrants cited other reasons, such as family issues or personal circumstances, which was slightly higher than the percentage for study but still significantly lower than that for employment.

in conclusion, many emploements choose a study in internal migration in Vietnam in 2012

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The report identifies the main features of the pie chart, but there are some issues with organization and clarity. The language used is not always accurate, and there are grammatical errors throughout the response. To improve, focus on using more precise language and ensuring that your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, pay attention to the structure of your report, making sure that each paragraph has a clear focus and that the information is presented in a logical order. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat clear, with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the flow of ideas within paragraphs could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are not always smooth, making it harder for the reader to follow the argument. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more sophisticated language to describe the data. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, proportions, and reasons for migration. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' consider using 'proportion,' 'share,' or 'ratio.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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