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Band 5+: Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates floor plans: Plan A, 2005, depicts a health centre layout with a garden, reception desk, physiotherapy room, three consulting rooms labeled CR1, CR2, CR3, office, and car parking for 12 spaces; Plan B, Present Day, shows the same centre with expanded layout including garden, minor operations room, physiotherapy room, three consulting rooms labeled CR1, CR2, CR3, office, larger car parking with 30 spaces, and altered floor plan with re-positioned reception desk and expanded entrance area.

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Plan A displays a hospital in 2005 and plan B shows the same centre in the present day. Overall, The capacity of health care centre is upgraded by enhancing car parking, changing main door position and constracting main operations room.

Plan A design was pretty simple in 2005. In fornt of the hospital there were a car parking, space can park 12 cars at a time.Through the main enterence, the plan shows three consulting rooms, two on the right side and one on the left side of the bulding. In front of main gate is reception area, on left upper side of hosptial there was office and on back right side was physiotheraphy room and garden cover all three side of hospital.

The architechture of the medical centre is changed in the present day. The main enterence move to the left side, left side garden converge to parking by increasing parking area. On previous enetrence space two conculting room is formed and upper left side of bulding a new main opertaions room is contructed. By comparing both plans, parking area upgraded to 30 spaces, adding one conculting room, one main operation room and reception disk lead to near enterance, while back and right side garden remain the same.

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centre: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing both plans and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the overall effectiveness. For instance, the report mentions 'constracting main operations room' and 'adding one consulting room,' but the visual description indicates that the number of consulting rooms remains the same (three) in both plans. Additionally, the report incorrectly states that the garden 'cover all three side of hospital' in 2005, whereas the description suggests a garden area but not necessarily surrounding all sides. The report also omits the repositioning of the reception desk and the expanded entrance area, which are key features. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main changes, such as the relocation of the entrance, the expansion of the car park, and the addition of the minor operations room, while ensuring all details are consistent with the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, a paragraph on the 2005 plan, a paragraph on the present day, and a comparison. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'left side garden converge to parking'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'whereas', 'in contrast', 'additionally') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea with smooth transitions between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to buildings and layout (e.g., 'car parking', 'reception area', 'consulting rooms'), but there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'fornt', 'enterence', 'bulding', 'opertaions', 'contructed') and word choice issues (e.g., 'constracting' instead of 'constructing', 'converge' instead of 'converted'). To improve, expand your range of descriptive vocabulary (e.g., 'relocated', 'expanded', 'converted') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid informal or incorrect terms like 'disk' for 'desk'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('space can park' should be 'space can accommodate'), incorrect prepositions ('on left upper side' should be 'in the upper left side'), and missing articles ('a car parking' should be 'car parking' or 'a car park'). Sentence structures are often repetitive and sometimes incomplete. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and proofread carefully for basic grammar and punctuation. Focus on accuracy with singular/plural forms and prepositions.

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