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Band 7+: Question: The diagram shows how yogurt is made at a factory. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates a yogurt processing flowchart starting with raw milk, analyzed for solids/fat/protein with CEM SMART 6, ORACLE, and Sprint, proceeding to adjust milk composition and blend ingredients, then pasteurization. It moves to homogenization, followed by cooling, inoculation with starter cultures, and another analysis phase. The process includes a hold/cool step, addition of flavors and fruit, and concludes with packaging.

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The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of yogurt in a factory.

The process consists of 9 major stages, beginning with collection of raw milk and ending with packaged yogurt products, where fats and proteins are analysed constantly by CEM SMART 6 ORACLE and sprint between major stages.

At first, raw milk is analysed by three instruments for checking solids, fats and liquids before transferring milk into cointainer with adjustable milk composition and blending ingredients. After that, the composed milk is sent to pasteurizer, where milk is pasteurized and analysed by same three equipments before putting it into homogenization machine. Following Homogenization, the milk is cooled in a cooling instrument.

In the next stage, the cool milk is sent to a machine which inoculates the milk with starting culture. Next, it is again analyzed for its quality before cooling and holding the cultured milk. Finally, the flavours and fruits are added before being packaged in a packaging machine.

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Task Response

The report provides a clear and logical overview of the yogurt production process, covering all main stages from raw milk to packaging. It includes relevant details about the analysis steps and mentions the equipment used. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the description of the analysis checking 'liquids' instead of 'protein', and the report does not explicitly mention the second analysis phase after inoculation. The structure is coherent, and the word count meets the requirement. To improve, ensure all key stages are accurately described and consider adding a brief comparison or highlighting the cyclical nature of the analysis steps.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized and follows the sequence of the process, which makes it easy to follow. Paragraphing is used appropriately, with a clear introduction and body paragraphs. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the phrase 'where fats and proteins are analysed constantly...' in the introduction is slightly awkward and interrupts the flow. Consider using clearer linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and accurate, with some good use of technical terms (e.g., 'pasteurized', 'homogenization', 'inoculates'). However, there are a few inaccuracies and informal choices, such as 'cointainer' (should be 'container'), 'starting culture' (better as 'starter culture'), and 'cooling and holding the cultured milk' could be more precise. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and avoid minor spelling errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including passive voice and complex sentences. However, there are some errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'analysed constantly by CEM SMART 6 ORACLE and sprint' (should be 'Sprint' with capital letter and 'are analysed'), 'before transferring milk into cointainer with adjustable milk composition' (unclear), and 'Following Homogenization' (should be 'homogenization' with lowercase). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences could be clearer. Overall, the grammar is controlled but not flawless.

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