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Band 5+: Question: You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Camellia,

I’m writing this letter to offer my sincere apology for I won’t be able to visit you in England due to some essential circumstance associated with my home.

To be specific about the reason my sisters marriage will be the next week on Sunday. It’s crucial day from my sister which I need to be beside. Because she is my only sister and I do not want to disappoint in any case.

First of all, I want to apologize for changing the plans which we made so long back. I do not have any worse to express my situation, so I decided to not to cancel the visit to but just postpone on it by 2 weeks accordingly I have already spoken to airlines, and they comprehended my situation and agree to change the dates.

I would like to know if you are convenient on change of dates, let me know your opinion.

Looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Anna Brighton.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The explanation, apology, and suggestion are all present. However, the explanation could be more concise and clearer.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall flow and cohesion. Improved sentence structure would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would improve the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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