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The image shows two maps of Langley for 1910 and 1950; in 1910, there were townhouses and a factory along Jordan Street, with Sherman Street featuring a store, wasteland, laundry, railway workers’ cottages south of wasteland, a café, and a railway line; by 1950, Sherman Mansions replaced the factory, flats replaced townhouses, and the railway line area transformed into Sherman Park and a children's play area, New Lane replaced the railway workers' cottages, the store and laundry moved northeast, and a new store was added at the northwest corner.

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The two diagrams illustrate the transformation of the town Langley from 1910 to 1950.

Overall, the town had undergone significant alterations with the removal of several facilities and introduction of new ones. The town expanded its green spaces.

Looking at the map of town in 1910, the town was a much residential area with the large number of individual houses. However, after forty years all of individual houses were demolished: the houses to the south of the Jordan street were replaced with flats, whereas Sherman mansions were introduced in the northern part of the town by the removal of factory.

Cancelation of wasteland led to relocation of laundry and cafe to the north, making space for the new store buildings and New Lane to the east of them. The most remarkable change was erection of Sherman Park in the center of the town with a lake and trees. A new Children’s play area was also added in the park. Railway lane was removed.

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The report covers the main changes between the two maps of Langley, noting the removal of some facilities and the addition of new ones, as well as the increase in green spaces. There is a generally clear overview of the transformations. To improve, ensure all key features are addressed with more specific details and consider a more structured approach to comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear overview and a logical progression of ideas. However, some sentences could be restructured for better flow and clarity. For example, the transition between paragraphs could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the connection between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the description. For example, instead of 'removal of several facilities,' you could specify what kind of facilities were removed. Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and showcase a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'the town was a much residential area' and 'all of individual houses were demolished' contain errors. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct article usage, and accurate tense usage. Review and correct these errors to improve the overall grammatical accuracy.

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