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Band 6+: Task 1: The chart and table below show the life expectancy in 2008 and increase in life expectancy between 1996 and 2008.

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The image contains a bar chart and a table about life expectancy. The bar chart shows the life expectancy in 2008 for four countries: Japan, 82.7; Korea, 79.2; U.S., 77.2; and Indonesia, 70.9. The table shows the increase in life expectancy in years for the same countries: Japan, 5.1; Korea, 9.3; U.S., 3.2; and Indonesia, 14.1.

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The diagramm and table depict the life expectancy in 2008 and improve in life expectancy between 1996 and 2008. Overall, Japan showed the greatest life expectancy in 2008 and the small one was Indonesia. While, increase in life expectancy in Indonesia was the highest one.

In 2008, Japan represented the highest life expectancy with 82.7, following this Korea ranked second with 79.2. While, Indonesia showed the smallest proportion was about 70.9, which was 6.3 lower than U.S. The proportion of U.S life expectancy was about 77.2.

In 12 years the Indonesia showed the greatest growth with 14.1, while Korea came after that with great life expectancy, which was about 9.3. Eventually, Japan represented the good amount of life expectancy, which was 5.1 and following this U.S showed the smallest increase with 3.2

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

expectancy: 8

showed: 4

indonesia: 4

japan: 3

while: 3

about: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing relevant information about life expectancy in 2008 and the increase in life expectancy between 1996 and 2008 for the four countries. There are some minor issues with word choice and phrasing. To improve, focus on using more precise language and varied sentence structures. Also, ensure that comparisons are clear and accurate. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate overview, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate but lacks sophistication. There's some repetition of words like 'showed' and 'life expectancy.' Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more precise language to describe the data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple, and there are issues with article usage, verb tense consistency, and word choice. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and proofreading carefully to minimize errors.

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