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Band 4+: Task 1: The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph detailing European gym attendance from 1990 to 2010 by age group: In 1990, 18-24 at 15%, 25-34 at 5%, 35-44 at 8%, 45 and over at 2%; In 1994, 18-24 at 20%, 25-34 at 9%, 35-44 at 10%, 45 and over at 5%; In 1998, 18-24 at 35%, 25-34 at 14%, 35-44 at 15%, 45 and over at 10%; In 2002, 18-24 at 40%, 25-34 at 17%, 35-44 at 20%, 45 and over at 15%; In 2006, 18-24 at 55%, 25-34 at 30%, 35-44 at 23%, 45 and over at 18%; In 2010, 18-24 at 60%, 25-34 at 35%, 35-44 at 32%, 45 and over at 22%.

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The chart illustrates the proportions of humans separates by four groups who went to the gym once or more in a month, during period from 1990 to 2010.

Overall, gym has become very popular activity for under 44 years, these activities were less popular who over 45 years old.

One noticeable feature is the sharp growth for individuals 18-24 years between 1998-2002 increased dramatically on 25 percent. Percentegs who go to the gym excellent increased in 1998 who is 25-34 years old and it’s sounds good. But who over 35 years old they diagrama started fluctuate, it’s started increased in 1998 after in 2002 statistic stopped but from 2006 statistic growed. 45 and over they were stability to 10 years and in 2006 they increased.

In this diagram have a lot changes and who stayed less changes, for example who is 18-24 and 25-34 years they dramatically increased by comparison who is 35-44 over years old they sometimes started incresed but at one time they became stable

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years: 8

increased: 4

started: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a degree of irrelevance. The writing also contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affects clarity. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and use clearer language. Also, ensure that the key features and trends are clearly identified and supported by specific data from the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The ideas are not well-organized, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The writing appears disjointed and difficult to follow. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related ideas together. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and create a smoother flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of synonyms and a reliance on simple words. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons more effectively. For example, instead of 'increased dramatically,' consider using 'rose sharply' or 'experienced a significant surge.' Also, 'Percentegs' is a misspelling of 'Percentages'. 'diagrama' is a misspelling of 'diagram'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. For example, 'gym has become very popular activity' should be 'gym has become a very popular activity'. 'who over 45 years old' should be 'those over 45 years old'. 'Percentegs who go to the gym excellent increased' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'they diagrama started fluctuate' is also grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct grammar usage.

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