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Band 5+: Task 1: The chart below shows the proportion of the female workforce and the proportion of managers and workers in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart with data on women laborers across America, Brazil, France, Japan, and Thailand; America: workforce 56%, managers 43%, company workers 52%; Brazil: workforce 42%, managers 32%, company workers 65%; France: workforce 45%, managers 36%, company workers 50%; Japan: workforce 40%, managers 33%, company workers 70%; Thailand: workforce 38%, managers 35%, company workers 41%.

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The presented illustration gives the proportion of the female workforce and the proportion of managers and workers in five countries.

Overall, the percentage of women being company workers has a high place in the raiting of five areas. Meanwhile, the percentage of women being managers and from in the workforce show the tiniest proportion.

Turning to the details, in the country America has the largest proportion of females being company workers to 60, after then women being managers stays to approximately 55 in the second place, while women in the workforce to 40 remains the last. The country Brazil reached up to almost 75 of percentage of women being company workers, whereas woman being managers to roughly 48, and female in the workforce to nearly 35 of rate.

As it represented, France and Japan have a similarity of their percentage , cause the proportion of women being company workers uplifted to close to 60 and 70, while the share of female individuals being managers increased to just over 40. Finally, in Thailand are being liquidated the percentage of women being company workers to nearly 65, however the proportion of women being managers and from workforce stay at last to approximately 30 and 25.

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being: 11

women: 8

managers: 6

workers: 6

proportion: 5

workforce: 5

percentage: 5

company: 5

female: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the data for each country, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the specific figures are often incorrect or vague (e.g., '60' instead of 52 for America, '55' instead of 43 for managers, etc.). Some countries are not fully described (e.g., Japan's workforce percentage is omitted). The language is sometimes unclear and contains errors (e.g., 'raiting', 'uplifted', 'are being liquidated'). To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all key features, and use clearer, more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly highlight the main trends. Paragraphing is present but not always effective, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a range of linking words and referencing to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'raiting', 'tiniest', 'uplifted', 'liquidated') and repetitive phrasing. There is an attempt to use a range of expressions, but accuracy and naturalness are lacking. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and avoid informal or incorrect terms. Also, ensure that terms like 'proportion' and 'percentage' are used consistently and correctly. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures that impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, prepositions, and word order. For example, 'in the country America has the largest proportion' is grammatically incorrect. The range of grammatical structures is limited, and punctuation is often misused. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences and then gradually incorporate more complex structures. Proofread to correct basic errors and ensure subject-verb agreement and proper use of articles.

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