Band 7+: TASK 1 - The maps give information about a university sports court.

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main changes to the university sports court between 1990 and the present. It covers key transformations such as the replacement of the park and car park with a basketball court and tennis courts, the conversion of the outdoor pool to an indoor pool, and the addition of a fitness centre. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report states that four tennis courts were built in the southwest, whereas the visual shows two tennis courts remained and a basketball court was added; it also mentions that the two tennis courts were removed by a fitness centre, which is not clearly supported by the visual. Additionally, the report does not mention the café and reception remaining unchanged. The overall structure is logical, but more precise language and attention to detail would improve clarity. To achieve a higher score, ensure all key features are accurately described and avoid contradictory statements.

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some minor issues with cohesion: for example, the use of 'where' in 'the right section of the sports courts was open, where an outdoor pool...' is slightly awkward, and the double period at the end of a sentence ('...separated. .') is a typographical error. Additionally, the phrase 'the park and its car park were removed from the courts which filled the whole left part' could be more clearly expressed. To improve, ensure that referencing and transitions between sentences are smooth and that punctuation is accurate. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but a few lapses prevent a higher score.

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied enough to describe the changes, with terms like 'recreational facilities', 'natural elements', 'entertainment area', and 'fitness centre'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'courts' appears multiple times) and a few phrasing issues, such as 'the right section of the sports courts was open' (which could be 'the right section was open' or 'the right section contained'). Also, 'the two tennis courts have been removed by a fitness centre' is awkward; it should be 'replaced by'. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid minor errors in collocation. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including passive voice ('have been changed', 'have been built'), relative clauses ('which filled', 'which has become'), and complex sentences. However, there are a few errors: 'in 1990 and the present days' should be 'in 1990 and the present day' or 'the present'; 'the two tennis courts have been removed by a fitness centre' is incorrect (should be 'replaced by'); and there is a double period. Punctuation is mostly correct, but these minor issues slightly reduce accuracy. With more careful proofreading and attention to prepositions and verb forms, a higher score could be achieved.