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Band 5+: Th graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph depicting the proportion of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three countries: Japan, Sweden, and the USA. In 1940, Japan starts at 5%, Sweden at 7%, and the USA at 9%. By 1960, Japan reaches 5%, Sweden 8%, and the USA 9%. In 1980, Japan is at 5%, Sweden at 14%, and the USA at 11%. In 2000, Japan is 10%, Sweden reaches 18%, and the USA is at 12%. By 2020, Japan is at 15%, Sweden at 20%, and the USA at 14%. Forecasts for 2040 predict Japan at 27%, Sweden at 25%, and the USA at 23%.

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The given line graphs represents the portion of the population aged 65 and beyond in different countries such as Japan, Sweden and USA between 1940 and 2040.

Overall, by Projection Japan is showing an uptrend with the just over a quarter of its population over 65 with approximately 27 % in contrast USA lagged behind with slightly above 20% and having the least portion of aged population. Moreover Sweden showed a trend that is edged upward with future projection of 25%.

For Japan, during 1940 to 2000, the graph shows remains relatively constant with some fluctuations and rose markedly just after 2000 till 2040. In comparison Sweden and USA both witnessed a growth in the similar manner with USA leading the list till 1990 whereas Sweden surpassed everyone on the charts during 1990 till almost 2030. During 1980 to 2020 USA indicates a little to no variation with ending in the least number of population above 65 which consisted around 22 %

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The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons between the three countries. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, and the description of the trends could be more precise. To improve, ensure all data points are accurate and provide more specific details about the rates of change and key turning points in each country's trend.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and a lack of clear transitions. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. To improve coherence, focus on using clearer connecting words and phrases to link sentences and paragraphs logically. Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and that the information within it is presented in a structured manner.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and some word choices are not entirely appropriate or precise ('uptrend,' 'lagged behind,' 'edged upward'). To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider variety of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to trends and proportions. Focus on using language that accurately reflects the data and avoids overly simplistic descriptions.

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The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and the use of articles and prepositions. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on constructing more complex sentences while ensuring they are grammatically correct. Proofread carefully for errors in basic grammar and sentence structure.

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