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Band 5+: The bar chart below compares the nationality of tourists to Dubai in 2010, 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph showing the percentage distribution of tourists by nationality for the years 2010, 2015, and 2020; in 2010: American tourists 10%, Saudi tourists 16%, Indian tourists 6%; in 2015: American tourists 12%, Saudi tourists 10%, Indian tourists 8%; in 2020: American tourists 13%, Saudi tourists 13%, Indian tourists 14%.

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The bar chart delineates information about where did visitors come from to Dubai in three certain years (2010, 2015, 2020).

Overall, what stands out from the bar chart is that every five years proportion of indian visitors rose, commencing with the lowest indicators of the bar chart, turning to the highest values at the end, while two others showed reverse pattern changing negligibly every five years.

Looking at the details, in 2010, Saudi torists were considerably more than American and Indian tourists, at about 15 and 10, 4, in turn, which means that number of Indian visitors demonstrated the lowest indicator of the bar chart.

As regards 2015 and 2020, in 2015, difference in number of visitors from certain countries were marginal, American visitors increased slightly from 10 to 12, while Saudi tourists decreased considerably from 15 to 11, moreover, Indian visitors grew notably from 4 to 7

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The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and omissions. The writing is not always clear, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, providing more specific details, and ensuring clarity in your writing. Also, aim for a more comprehensive overview and clearer comparisons between the data points. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the report with a clearer introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends, and a concise conclusion. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' 'furthermore') would help connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related information effectively.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. While some appropriate terms are used ('negligibly,' 'marginal'), expanding the range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'rose,' consider using 'increased,' 'climbed,' or 'surged,' depending on the magnitude of the change. Also, ensure accurate use of prepositions and collocations.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'where did visitors come from' should be rephrased for better grammatical accuracy. Proofreading carefully for errors in tense and word choice is essential.

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