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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows energy production by source in 2020, measured in quadrillion BTUs.

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The image is a bar chart titled 'Energy production by source, 2020', which displays energy production in quadrillion BTUs on the y-axis from 0 to 35. The data for the four sources is as follows: Oil at approximately 21.5, Natural gas at approximately 31.5, Coal at approximately 15.5, and Renewable at approximately 10.8 quadrillion BTUs.

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The bar chart shows the amount of energy produced from different sources in 2020. The figures are measured in quadrillion BTUs.

Overall, it can be seen that some energy sources produced considerably more energy than others. Fossil fuels were the main sources of energy production, while renewable sources produced less energy.

Looking at the chart in more detail, [source 1] was the largest source of energy, producing approximately [number] quadrillion BTUs. This was followed by [source 2], which generated around [number] quadrillion BTUs. In comparison, [source 3] produced a smaller amount, at about [number] quadrillion BTUs.

The remaining sources accounted for relatively low levels of energy production. [Source 4] generated approximately [number] quadrillion BTUs, while [source 5] produced the least energy, at around [number]. Overall, the figures show that energy production in 2020 depended more heavily on some sources than others.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

energy: 8

sources: 6

produced: 5

quadrillion: 5

[source: 5

[number]: 5

production: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. It uses placeholders like '[source 1]' and '[number]' instead of actual data, and includes a fifth source ('[source 5]') that is not present in the chart. The overall trend is mentioned, but the specific details are missing or incorrect, which detracts from task achievement. To improve, replace placeholders with the actual sources and figures, ensure the number of sources matches the chart, and provide a clear overview with accurate data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the use of placeholders like '[source 1]' and '[number]' disrupts the flow and makes it difficult to follow the message effortlessly. To improve, replace placeholders with actual data and ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear main idea. The paragraphing is generally well-managed, but the final paragraph could be more concise to avoid repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'energy production', 'quadrillion BTUs', and 'fossil fuels'. However, the report lacks the range and sophistication expected of a high band score. Phrases such as 'considerably more energy' and 'relatively low levels' are adequate but could be enhanced with more precise and varied vocabulary. To improve, use synonyms and more specific terms (e.g., 'predominant', 'substantial', 'minor contribution') and avoid repetitive phrasing. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is accurate with a good range of structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of passive voice. The report is well-punctuated and error-free. To reach a higher band, incorporate more varied sentence structures, such as conditional or comparative forms, and ensure that all parts of the report are fully developed without placeholders. Overall, the grammatical control is strong.

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