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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows energy production by source in 2020, measured in quadrillion BTUs.

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The image is a bar chart titled 'Energy production by source, 2020', which displays energy production in quadrillion BTUs on the y-axis from 0 to 35. The data for the four sources is as follows: Oil at approximately 21.5, Natural gas at approximately 31.5, Coal at approximately 15.5, and Renewable at approximately 10.8 quadrillion BTUs.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of energy produced from oil, natural gas, coal and renewable sources in 2020, measured in quadrillion BTUs.

Overall, natural gas produced the highest amount of energy, while renewable sources generated the least.

Natural gas was the leading source of energy, producing approximately 33 quadrillion BTUs. Oil followed with around 23 quadrillion BTUs, which was about 10 quadrillion BTUs lower than natural gas.

In contrast, coal generated about 10 quadrillion BTUs, while renewable sources produced the least energy at approximately 5 quadrillion BTUs. This shows a significant gap between fossil fuels and renewable energy production.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

quadrillion: 6

energy: 5

renewable: 4

produced: 3

natural: 3

sources: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, providing an overview of energy production by source in 2020. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., natural gas at 33 instead of 31.5, oil at 23 instead of 21.5, coal at 10 instead of 15.5, and renewable at 5 instead of 10.8). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid significant rounding errors. Also, aim for a more balanced description, giving more detail to the coal and renewable energy figures instead of focusing primarily on the differences between the highest and lowest values. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and logical progression. However, the contrast between the higher and lower energy sources could be emphasized more effectively. Consider adding a sentence or two in the overview to highlight the disparity between natural gas and renewables to set the stage for the detailed comparison. Also, ensure that the transitions between sentences within paragraphs are smooth and contribute to the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and conveys the information clearly. To enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more precise language to describe the quantities and comparisons. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'produced,' consider alternatives like 'generated,' 'yielded,' or 'accounted for.' Also, explore using more descriptive adjectives to characterize the differences in energy production. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a strong command of grammar with very few errors. To further improve, focus on incorporating a greater variety of sentence structures to add complexity and sophistication to the writing. For instance, combine simple sentences or use more complex clauses to express relationships between data points more effectively.

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