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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows energy production by source in 2020, measured in quadrillion BTUs.

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The image is a bar chart titled 'Energy production by source, 2020', which displays energy production in quadrillion BTUs on the y-axis from 0 to 35. The data for the four sources is as follows: Oil at approximately 21.5, Natural gas at approximately 31.5, Coal at approximately 15.5, and Renewable at approximately 10.8 quadrillion BTUs.

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The bar chart illustrates how oil,natural gas,coal, and renewable gas produces energy in 2020. (Unit in quadrillion BTUs).

Overall, The most energy production was gotten from natural gas with 33 quadrillion BTUs dedicated to it. Renewable gas produced 12 quadrillion BTUs of energy which amounts to the least energy source.

In comparison between the first two sources of energy, Oil and natural gas. 10 quadrillion BTUs was the difference of this production with Oil providing 23 quadrillion BTUs of this natural bi-product. 33 quadrillion BTUs was gotten from Natural gas which was the most profitable source.

Between Coal and renewable gas, Coal produced the most energy in comparison with renewable gas at, 10 quadrilion BTUs while renewable gas produced energy valued at 5 quadrilion BTUs which accounts for the least source of energy.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'produced,' try using words like 'generated,' 'yielded,' or 'accounted for.' Expand your vocabulary related to energy production and data comparison to enhance the report's clarity and sophistication.

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