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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows energy production by source in 2020, measured in quadrillion BTUs.

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The image is a bar chart titled 'Energy production by source, 2020', which displays energy production in quadrillion BTUs on the y-axis from 0 to 35. The data for the four sources is as follows: Oil at approximately 21.5, Natural gas at approximately 31.5, Coal at approximately 15.5, and Renewable at approximately 10.8 quadrillion BTUs.

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The bar chart illustrates how oil,natural gas,coal, and renewable gas produces energy in 2020. (Unit in quadrillion BTUs).

Overall, The most energy production was gotten from natural gas with 33 quadrillion BTUs dedicated to it. Renewable gas produced 12 quadrillion BTUs of energy which amounts to the least energy source.

In comparison between the first two sources of energy, Oil and natural gas. 10 quadrillion BTUs was the difference of this production with Oil providing 23 quadrillion BTUs of this natural bi-product. 33 quadrillion BTUs was gotten from Natural gas which was the most profitable source.

Between Coal and renewable gas, Coal produced the most energy in comparison with renewable gas at, 10 quadrilion BTUs while renewable gas produced energy valued at 5 quadrilion BTUs which accounts for the least source of energy.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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energy: 8

quadrillion: 6

renewable: 5

natural: 4

produced: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported from the chart. Some of the information is also presented in a slightly disorganized manner, affecting the clarity of the overview and comparisons. To improve, ensure accurate data extraction and present the information in a more structured way, focusing on clear comparisons and overall trends. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main points. The writing would benefit from a clearer structure, such as an introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific comparisons, and a conclusion. Improve the flow of information by using cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'produced,' try using words like 'generated,' 'yielded,' or 'accounted for.' Expand your vocabulary related to energy production and data comparison to enhance the report's clarity and sophistication.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'was gotten' is not the correct way to express the idea. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in grammar and punctuation.

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